![]() It merely draws attention to itself and holds back the story. First Blood, Volume 1 David Morrell Grand Central Publishing, 2000 - Fiction - 320 pages 7 Reviews Reviews arent verified, but Google checks for and removes fake content when its. Few of them curse any more than a normal person would. I can only reply that in my research I spend considerable time with policemen and soldiers. Someone might object that this kind of dialog is realistic in certain situations-intense scenes involving policemen or soldiers for example. The writer wonders if the dialog is strong enough and decides a lot of -blanking-blank- will do the trick. Then why put this stuff on the page?Īs near as I can determine, this abomination occurs because a writer is corrupted by the awful -blanking- dialog that movies inflict on us these days. In life if you met someone who spoke like this, you'd want to flee. ![]() If this is as clever as you can be, I don't want to read your prose. I didn't pick up your book to read garbage. ![]() Two things happen when I read this junk: I get bored and I get angry. 'If you don't -blanking- get your -blanking-blank-blank- in to this house this -blanking- minute, I'm going to -blank- your -blank- and nail it to the -blanking- door.' ![]() I've seen beginning writers pepper curse words through sentence after sentence. ![]() “If the passage absolutely demands cursing, be moderate. ![]()
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